Draft work feedback - 3 Jan

Your draft work is really taking shape now Kyle, and definitely has the potential to achieve a high grade.

You must get your images in place and start to consider how you can integrate some colour into your work. Then you can really start to finalise the process and complete the work.

Good work to date - make sure you complete all your research and planning and then you can focus on the evaluation process.

Carl.

Feedback - 10 Dec

Kyle - points so far on your blog:

Target audience and Advertisers mood boards are excellent as is the analysis work which goes with them - keep this standard up throughout and you should be aiming towards the top grade boundary.

All of your research work is not showing on your blog - I think you may have used a link from OneDrive which is causing them to not show possibly for anyone else viewing your blog apart from you. Use an app viewer such as Flipsnack or Scribd if they are in PDF format or Slideshare for presentations. I know you have completed the work but I can't mark it if I cannot see it!
Get this sorted ASAP!

Also, you are still missing some planning posts, namely the colour mood board and initial ideas statement. If completed, make sure you have added these to your blog ASAP.

Have you completed your questionnaire for the main task yet?? If so, this is something you can get on your blog and you will need to analyse the results in relation to your main task.

Good work so far - your main task is coming along and is showing a lot of promise to be strong, high grade work but get your main images done!

Carl